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his forbidden affair has yet to end
the makeup stains on his crisp white shirts still make weekly appearances
...sometimes even daily

unaware that I can smell another woman's perfume on his skin,
he proceeds to ask about my day
oblivious to the fact that I'm aware of his sins,
he takes me in his arms

why do I allow myself to return his cheating kiss?
why do I listen to his apologies and excuses time and time again?
...for that matter, why do I accept them?

straight out of shakespeare
I assume he's the villain
yet I allow myself to be victimized,
so I suppose it's not entirely his fault

someday the twinkle in his eye will make its departure
one of these days she'll grow tired of his smile
but my arms will be crossed
and my face will be stern
...who wants to read yesterday's news?

so get it while the gettin's good
I like my men to be wanted
I like to feel as if he picked me from the crowd

something about finding numbers in his coat pockets gets my engines going

like taking a bite out of the most forbidden fruit
I wonder if she knows there's someone else
...I wonder if she cares.
©2006-2009 ~dramatics
:icondramatics:

Author's Comments

These days, it seems like infidelity is everywhere. Why not write a poem about it? (from a less than usual point of view, that is) This is not about me, nor anyone I know.

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:iconwolf-theoneoflight:
Wow, a very powerful peice yet weighs both sides of her emotions and her wants. The 5th stanza is an absolute blinder

"someday the twinkle in his eye will make its departure
one of these days she'll grow tired of his smile
but my arms will be crossed
and my face will be stern
...who wants to read yesterday's news?"

the last line was just astounding. It just lingered in my head for a while and i paused to think about it before i moved on.
Great piece here!
:icondjpreach:
i was just going to make a quick comment to say that im gona hold you to the deal but
once i read it. it actually hits a lil too close to home :hmm:
nicely written btw it gets alot of things that happens when someone cheats
:iconrhyan:
I like this, Liz. You effectively portray the conflicting and confusing emotions people must overcome and the questions they need answered, with the most common being "why?".

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Ever wonder about those people who spend $2 apiece on those little bottles of Evian water? Try spelling Evian backward.
~George Carlin


:icondrownedkytten:
Stark and raw portrait of the meaning of life's more difficult affairs.



~*Katie :silentkitty:
:iconcameronsphoto:
That is really well put together, I just like how it shows almost three sides of the story

Cameron
:iconm1nam1:
Ah, the cheataz. This was a really interesting poem, nice job.

Incidentally, I got to your page from the Shoutboard. ^^;

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:icongod-of-battle:
Awesome man.. everything just goes together- amazing
:iconframed-morbide-angel:
thats amazing! like you have no clue how much i love this one!

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